Sunday, July 3, 2011

Detached heart*

Detached heart*

A faint place in my heart
Had a feeling one day we would part
We just never seen eye to eye
Your Love for me I suffered and cried
Now never to do it again
I will be like the breeze and leave here like the wind

Dom*Colucci 2011


  1. Dear Dom: Should the last sentence read: I will like the breeze.." rather than as written? Just makes more sense? As if love ever makes sense! :)Although I am not good at this at all lately; am I; making sense...wonders why? Mustbe...LOVE! Can't run away from that not even a breeze could escape if in fact truth be told (very rarely ever) about Love?

  2. I just corrected it my Dearest chiccoreal...I am too fast in doing this before I send it out..good poem though...thanks as well..enjoy with Love in my heart(+)

  3. this was sad! :(

    hope it never happens.

    lots of love.