Saturday, July 3, 2010

She is the fragrance in my heart*



She is the fragrance in my heart*


She came into my life, with the feel of ocean breeze
Inside myself felt displaced and she put me at ease
The fragrance that wafted her smelled so sweet
Lilac and cedar, a definite mild odor was the treat
She held my hand, gave me comfort and both of us touched
It was her loving charm in her eyes that I truly loved so much


Dom*Colucci © 2010

8 comments:

  1. dearest soulbro,
    "was"? it sounds sad. its really, really beautiful.
    lots of love.

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  2. Really, why is it all in the past?

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  3. http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/07/jingles-july-follower-awards-happy-4th.html

    some awards,
    please take 2 to 5 and enjoy!

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  4. Golden Lotus of God's Love....was would be the smell of her was intoxicating but her eyes let me see deeper into her and not smell her fragrance no more...or possibly a whoops moment as you caught a mistake I made...it was worth a shot...enjoy as well(+)
    soulbro*:)xo

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  5. My Dearest Shiamala...I dunno...good answer?...enjoy as well(+0
    Dom*:)xo

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  6. Golden Lotus of God's Love..I will change it as I can...(+)
    soulbro*:)xo

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  7. Thanks Jingle for these awards and all you do for me..as I appreciate how you love my poems as I love yours as well...enjoy also(+)
    soulbro*:)

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  8. dearest soulbro,
    this sounds better, i would rather prefer she is the fragrance in my heart.
    i just loved this one. its full of tender love.
    lots of love.

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