Saturday, October 24, 2009

Autumn treat

Autumn treat*

The brisk fall air settles in all over the town
The nip and chill of fall has finally came down
Patchwork treed forest of rainbowed colours fine
Each precisely placed in rows that patiently took its time
Wonderfully done by God this is the beauty of art
Supreme Being has the touch from the Soul and the heart
Look with breathtaking love and critique if need be
But remember look undiscriminately open and eyes to see
Dom* Colucci 2009


  1. While looking for my pesponses, I am enjoying your early poetry. needs to be publish at some point, i think...

  2. yes was thinking the same thing as well....enjoy my Dearest Shiamala(+)